December 30, 2024
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Showing vs. Telling in Pitches
What Does “Show, Don’t Tell” Mean?
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December 23, 2024
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Theme vs. Plot
Sharing the Takeaway in a Pitch Without Spoiling the Ending
One of the trickiest parts of crafting a pitch is knowing how much to reveal. You want to give agents and editors a sense of your story’s theme and takeaway, but you don’t want to spoil the ending, otherwise why bother reading the manuscript? How do you strike the right balance?
The Difference Between Plot and Theme:
December 11, 2024
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Voice Matters
How to Infuse Your Pitch with Your Story’s Unique Style
Your pitch is more than just a summary of your story—it’s a reflection of your narrative voice. Infusing your pitch with your story’s unique style is the key to making it stand out to agents and editors.
The Importance of Voice: Voice is the personality of your writing. It’s what makes your story unique and memorable. When crafting your pitch, try to capture the same tone and style that you use in your manuscript.
Tips for Finding Your Pitch Voice:
November 18, 2024
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Narrative Pitch Formula in Action
In the Picture Book Pitch Formula, we gave you a template to use as a starting point for writing your pitches. As a reminder, this is the template:
You’ll notice that this template incorporates all the key components of a great pitch.
- Who is your HERO?
- What do they want in the story? What’s their GOAL?
- What or who is standing in their way? What OBSTACLES/PROBLEMS are getting in the way of pursuing their goal?
- What ACTIONS DO THEY TAKE to solve the problem?
- What do they LEARN or how have they changed by the end?
- What is the TAKEAWAY OR THEME of your story for the young reader?
The template is powerful because it removes the guesswork around how to fit so much information into just 1-3 sentences.
Let’s show you what this looks like in action by using a classic picture book we’re all familiar with – WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE.
Here’s how all the key components are included in this pitch:
- Who is your HERO? Max is our hero.
- What do they want in the story? What’s their GOAL? Max’s goal is to be wild.
- What or who is standing in their way? What OBSTACLES/PROBLEMS are getting in the way of pursuing their goal? Max’s mother sending him to bed without supper is the obstacle.
- What ACTIONS DO THEY TAKE to solve the problem? Max’s actions involve embarking on an adventure.
- What do they LEARN or how have they changed by the end? What is the TAKEAWAY OR THEME of your story for the young reader? By the end, Max learns that being where someone loves you best is even better than being wild.
Now try the template with your own picture book pitches!
Want more help with picture book pitches? Grab our FREE Picture Book Summit Pitch Formula HERE!
November 11, 2024
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Elements of a Picture Book Pitch
Focusing on Obstacles and Stakes
A great picture book pitch isn’t just about conveying what your hero wants—it’s about what’s standing in their way. It’s about conveying the dramatic tension in your story, and what’s at stake for your hero.
Understanding the role of obstacles and stakes is key to creating a pitch that resonates with agents, editors, and ultimately, readers.
Hero and Goal
Every pitch starts with a hero and their goal. But achieving a goal without obstacles is too easy… why should the reader care? It’s the challenges and conflicts that make a story engaging.
The Role of Obstacles in Picture Book Pitches
November 8, 2024
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The Purpose of a Picture Book Pitch
Piquing Agent & Editor Interest Without Giving Away the Farm
Crafting a compelling pitch is an essential skill for any picture book author. It is the single most important part of your submissions package to agents and editors for publication consideration. A well-written pitch will spark an agent or editor’s interest, making them eager to read your manuscript.
But what exactly is a pitch, and how do you create one that stands out?
What is a Pitch?
A pitch, also known as an elevator pitch, hook, or logline, is a brief synopsis of your picture book. It’s a 1-3 sentence summary that captures the essence of your story without giving away too much. Think of it as your story’s “trailer”—it should be intriguing and leave the audience wanting more.
